Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.

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Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.

In the world every country has at least one city which carries extra focus rather than others may be for the beautifulness, economic importence, or culteral activities or anything els. In the prompt, it is contended that , To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities . I conced that in few respect non major areas represent important characteristic. In most respect, however , I strongly believe that major city carries a huge importance to understand the vital impact of society.

The major cities carry importance for its economical activities. For example , beijing in china, this cities economical issue is a vital characteristic of its society. most of electronic indrustry is being growing there. Majurity of young people works tech related job in china. this way beijing culter has great importance for social characteristics.

Famous cities represent cultural train of that society. For my supportive example , london in England , holds most of culter entire of that country. most important building stay in london. well known river also which has historical importance. Queen lives in this city. So it’s a cultural hub of that country. For instance this city has great impact on British culter.

most of important educational institute lies in major city. As an example , dhaka in Bangladesh , has some well known university. For instance , dhaka university , In numerous page of history it has great position.in 1952 they launched movement and secrificed 5 of students theire life for mother language movement. In 1971 they was the hub of liberation war.Finally the student of that university always cancious of public’s fundamental demand.

Admittedly under some circumestence , rural socity has importance. In the country where farming is main economic stream its has different culter rather than cities.

In sum, in few respect non major area has some importance , however in most of case major city has great importance. I strongly recomand to study major city for understanding the importance characteristics of society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, so, well, at least, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46153846154 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07157927302 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535384615385 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9589746724 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9583333333 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5416666667 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143668097376 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459917422372 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467419475806 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08020641008 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461563475107 0.0667264976115 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 48.8420337079 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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