Nowaday, the trend adopting pets is enjoyed widely. However, some of people, who wants to have pets to make them not feel lonely, they don't have enough knowledge to take care of pets. In my opinion, that kind of people should not keep any animals.
Firstly, taking care of pets is the same as you take care of a baby.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: tgbrfv
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...opting pets is enjoyed widely. However, some of people, who wants to have pets to make them no...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...pets to make them not feel lonely, they dont have enough knowledge to take care of p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, so, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 41.998997996 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 261.0 1615.20841683 16% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 60.0 315.596192385 19% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.78315768371 4.20363070211 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00076374306 2.80592935109 71% => OK
Unique words: 45.0 176.041082164 26% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 84.6 506.74238477 17% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0755128679 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.25 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403089155627 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191557730047 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107081150795 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305277125394 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179252043766 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 12.4159519038 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 78.4519038076 15% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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