The ideal job
There are many definitions of what a perfect job is. But for me, an ideal job needs three factors below. First, an ideal job is a job that provides a great environment. The workplace has to have enough space and help you grow up. it’s also an open communication place, staffs always listen feedback. Second, an ideal job allows you learn new things, have many challenges. Your skill are utilized to solve problems. The fact is that if you meet many difficulty, you will have more experience. So, you can bring big profits to the company. Finally, perfect job is a job which helps you have high salary and promotions opportunities. you will work hard and of course , it is because you want to have worthy results. that’s three factors I think it symbolizes for an ideal job.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-03-01 | Rosie rose | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun difficulty seems to be countable; consider using: 'many difficulties'.
Suggestion: many difficulties
... problems. The fact is that if you meet many difficulty, you will have more experience. So, you...
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Suggestion: You
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nities. you will work hard and of course , it is because you want to have worthy r...
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Suggestion: That&apos
...ecause you want to have worthy results. that's three factors I think it symbolizes f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, as to, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 8.0 33.7804878049 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 647.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6884057971 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65256003463 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659420289855 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.5506777238 43.030603864 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.9166666667 112.824112599 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5 22.9334400587 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38069537588 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164820599026 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184540728353 0.0843802449381 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38069537588 0.15604864568 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 61.2550243902 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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