Some people believe that globalisation will eventually lead to an erosion of cultural identity.
What are the causes of this issue? What do you suggest can be done to stop it from happening?
One of the most topical issues in recent times has been the adverse impacts of globalisation. There is one school of thought which holds that the cultural identity erosion has resulted from globalisation. This essay will examine the reasons why the erosion of cultural identity is occurring, and offer some solutions to address this issue.
From an overall perspective, there are a wide range of causes of the extinction of cultural identity. Perhaps the primary reason for this is multiculturalism. For example, Singapore has been affected by the diversity of cultures from many nations, such as: Malaysia and China. Another cause is communication among corporations in the country, which can lead to the disappearance of dialects. This is because there are loads of investors who move to other countries to cooperate, which means they must use a lingua franca ( English ) to communicate. As a result, less uncommon tongues may be forgotten, which also leads to the cultural identity of a nation probably be eroded.
However, there are many available solutions to address the cultural identity which has been eroded. First of all, the authorities should enact laws to regulate globalisation. The reason for this is that if the diversity of cultures is controlled, the particular cultures in each country will remain. The less people who are affected by multiculturalism, the less erosion of cultural identity. Secondly, the government ought to encourage people should use two languages, such as a mother tongue and a second language. The consequence of this is people not only keep the specific cultural identities of their homeland, but also socialise with other nations.
To conclude, this is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. However, in my mind, the government should enact laws to preserve cultural identities. If the government chooses to ignore this issue, customs and cultures will probably be forgotten.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28246753247 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98955813363 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9243299252 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242267621339 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777096392152 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052902289669 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152229311911 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276283378876 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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