Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties ,birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money others think these are necessary ! Give reasons
Investing in different life events like marriage and other anniversary celebrations in a grandeur way for some is eroding of wealth and for others is making it memorable.In my opinion ,spending is a relative term and people utilise money according to ones pocket.This essay will discuss the positive sides of holding parties and events .
Firstly,we all are concious beings and showcase lot of emotions.Certain occasions like marriage ,first birthday and anniversaries are grand life events because we always have a fantasy to celebrate and Cherish the moments and make it memorable.furthermore,these events may occur ones or few times in one's lifetime,so we do not want to miss a chance to make it special.That is why we want to organise it in all the vibrancy and glitter for which we like to spend wholeheartedly.for instance ,a father making the best use of his savings on his daughters wedding cannot we compared to any other feeling.
Secondly,our milen has a great impact as we are social animals.we love to be involved in company of our near and dear ones.This is a reason for lavish display of our wealth,so that we can meet and enjoy the moment together.In adddition to this ,everyone do not get to meet now and then .So to enjoy the moment with your circle of family and friends means they have a chance to shower all the love and best wishes.Hosting an event is one of the way to pay gratitude to the attendees
To sum up ,it is perfectly fine to make your occasion brimming with liveliness for all the great memories to ponder over and to seek blessings of your loved ones .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78545454545 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15633319442 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 91.0 20.2975951904 448% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.123310111 49.4020404114 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 438.666666667 106.682146367 411% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 91.6666666667 20.7667163134 441% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.6666666667 7.06120827912 491% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116201258395 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972779554531 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854417289309 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734693774626 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847632169012 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.0 13.0946893788 359% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.89 50.2224549098 -42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 11.3001002004 343% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.69 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.11 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.4 10.1190380762 379% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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