To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Currently, people are migrating from small town, village to major city. New cities are building and expanding day by day and population has increased with different cultured, different geographic region's people. But, if u want to understand the characteristics of the society than u have to study the rural area rather than major city.
From ancient times people of rural area inherits the ethics from their grand parents. People lives lovingly with their family. They believes whole village is their family and have positive energy between them. In major cities neighbors don't know who lives beside him,though they haven't time to talk because they have other lot many works suppose to do and in rural area, people lives with their cultural values and own tradition. So, by studying the rural area we can understand this values.
Further, In rural area, we can find ancient buildings, temples which contains the lessons of the life, values of the life. In Egypt, Mummies were built with extra-ordinary technology with accurate measurements and they placed with high level medical technology today they haven't vanished.In India, there are lot many step wells to drink water, well established temples to pray god, forts to guard specific region. So, we can study the technology from this type of rural area.
However, In major cities people locate from different countries, states with variety of languages and they lives with their own style.
In conclusion, it is definitely true that a study of the rural area of any society helps in understanding the traditional, social, ethical and technological values.
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Sentence: They believes whole village is their family and have positive energy between them.
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Sentence: So, by studying the rural area we can understand this values.
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Sentence: However, In major cities people locate from different countries, states with variety of languages and they lives with their own style.
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