Many social scientists believe that in the future traditional printed/paper books will disappear. They say e-books have so many advantages over paper books that printed book will not exist. What are some advantages of e-books.
A majority of experts suppose that in the next few years traditional paper - bound books will vanish. experts indicate electronic book bring various benefits than hard-cover books which will be obsolete. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages of e-books and give my opinion.
There are two main advantages for using online books. First of all, it is really convenient, people can read and scan news whenever they want. For instance, I just need a few clicks away on the internet, which show me the huge amount of information such as: Entertainment, sport, government bureaucracy. Additionally, when it comes to students in the university and hectic people. They do not want spend money to pick the reference books on their shelves instead of download PDF file on the internet. Students can either access online at home or reading and debate each other at coffee shop.
By contrast, it shows a few drawbacks. When people using e-books, they are quite tough to take note as opposed to paper that is really simple. Another thing is that, it brings a bad impact on eyestrain. Because of reading so much or looking at computer screen and tablet for a long time, their eyes will contact immediately with light and UV consumed from these applicants. Furthermore, paper books is the most popular mean of accessing information among senior citizens for the simple reason, they do not know how to use technology.
In conclusion, Although e-books is flexible in modern life but traditional books are still important for a few reasons above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Experts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, still, another thing, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98449612403 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68507766638 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.372212168 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285591578679 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892379219719 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871683796085 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187805448045 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100620395282 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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