The youngsters outweigh the elders
Nowadays, young adults are taking account of large percentage of population in some nations in comparison with older people. This issue can bring about both positive and negative results. In my opinion, the beneficial aspects outweigh the detrimental ones.
On one hand, the large percentage of young adult population can have many plus points. First of all, youngsters making up a major proportion of population means that the number of citizen in the labor age is very significant which can boost the productivity of economy of nations and lead to considerable development. Another aspect, in the age of technology, youngster can access to the modernity more easily to enhance the efficiency of all fields from agriculture to industry and science. For instance, the old people now can hardly understand the process of producing agricultural products involved in technology while the young can. It is the factor that can ensure countries not left behind and bring about numerous political, economic and social advantages. Therefore, there are many benefits that the young adults are contributing.
On the other hand, there are some negative aspects that need concerning when the young population take the major figures. Most importantly, being exposed to outside values can make countries lose origins of many cultures, history and so on. With the increasing loss of the old people, many sources of traditional essences may risk disappearing. Additionally, although youngsters can be energetic and open-minded, they need the elder to guide and transfer many experience to be more mature in any fields. As a result, the lack of the older in the population can cause many detrimental effects.
To sum up, the elders play an important role in guiding the youngsters and preserving numerous traditions. However, the larger number of young citizens can contribute to the more significant development as well as protection for nation’s values with deeper education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
...ey need the elder to guide and transfer many experience to be more mature in any fields. As a r...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on's values with deeper education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37741935484 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96472672915 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2026022798 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127753089426 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399074990708 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665788366624 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789143208361 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304140051714 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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