Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Too far, so close! This is the condition of current world. Although in one sight various nations by different cultures spread out throughout the world, it seems that they become much more similar with together in comparison with past; they find similar point of views since technology provide rudimentary for such closeness. I do agree with creating a single world culture due to expansion of social instruments nationally and preparation various documentary programs provided by television directly.
By the advent of internet, world’s appearance completely has changed. Whether people enter to various websites professionally, they observe multitude of other simple requirements like email, yahoo messenger, and the like without which today’s human cannot be active in adverse realms. For example, in field of finding job, ones require to get acquainted with online interviews by such as Skype; nonetheless, they will lose lots of opportunities in other points of the world. So, having knowledge about internet plays a key role in current world.
Specifically speaking, television is the most primary implements by modern tech. After its inventing, either whole nations annexed together all of a sudden, or their spirits came close. Spirits involved various things. As an illustration, from foods which various cultures served, to dress code of their nations, all got much more tangible in comparison with past. Hadn’t such tool invented, cultures would have remained strange with together.
All in all, I contended that modern technology is tending to create a single culture as the result of getting close. Fewer people confound live evidence existed in current world. Isn’t that what you think right?
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