You are going to visit New Zealand for an 'English and Homestay' program. You have just received details of your homestay host family.
Write your first letter to the family. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• ask the family some questions to get information that is important to you
• tell the family about your arrival date and time
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
I am writing to appreciate your kindly reply and accept me as your guest. I am Soulmaz from Iran and have participated in English and Homestay program to promote my English skills and speak fluently. Moreover, as I am planning to continue education in New Zealand, I prefer to know more about your culture and life style.
Since I have not ever been in this country, I would be glad, if you could guide me. At first, I need some information about spring weather to bring suitable clothes. Moreover, I would like to be aware of your family hobby and how you do usually spend your spare time, this could help me to take part in all your routines. Finally, it should be mentioned that I will arrive on 20th April at 4 a.m., should I expect you at airport to pick me up?
I am looking forward to hearing your kind reply and please do not hesitate to contact me, if you need more information.
Sincerely Yours
Soulmaz
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-07 | Sarab.rathor4@gmail.com | 78 | view |
| 2019-03-13 | soli | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45402298851 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3981774579 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4180386157 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243571946244 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925279643314 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535610729258 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113327703918 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745483677532 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.