Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Other people believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.
In the contemprory era fighting against climate change is a crucial
problem around the globe. The developed countries are able to
overcome it and they have a higher responsibility to combat this
problem . With reference to the context some people believe that
all the kingdoms should have equal responsibility towards protecting
the environment . It can be strongly agreed .
It can be noted that in 21st century almost all big realms are developed
and they are able to fight against any natural calamities,climate change
and so on . These countries have enough funds to protect their
environment and have a higher responsibilities towards it than other
developing nations. In addition to this the population of countries
who have a sequenial economy have broader minds which can think
in a brighter way to this problem. For example , economies like USA
,Canada,Europe and so on have funds to open organisations who can
work to this aspect which can result in overall development of a
particular economy .
However , on the other hand talking about growing economies ,
they have larger problems than environmental change to overcome
in order to compete at an international level in terms of growth .
These type of kingdoms do not think in a bright way to fight against
this problem , it is not imporant to them .
Rich countries have better money to invest however, responsibility
is same for all.
Thus , this kind of problem should be vrucial for all economies around
the globe and they should plan in such a way that sequential growth
of economy.
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- Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Other people believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, for example, in addition, kind of, talking about, with reference to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26771653543 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0352574204 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9508218934 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421652768957 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161962064581 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140756143311 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107567846949 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103273907851 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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