being a celebrity such as famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...can never lead a normal life-like others .A simple reason for this is that they wi...
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Suggestion: A
...n never lead a normal life-like others .A simple reason for this is that they wil...
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Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s can be victim to harsh criticism. When a star doesnt perform well enough, he ca...
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Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...victim to harsh criticism. When a star doesnt perform well enough, he can get heavily...
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Line 1, column 603, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...extent of insulting and threatening too.Finally, For a celebrity to have a successful ...
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Line 1, column 627, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...threatening too.Finally, For a celebrity to have a successful life, he needs to b...
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Line 1, column 726, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , nor
...mention anything wrong neither about him,nor about his fans because that could crea...
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Line 1, column 758, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...bout him,nor about his fans because that could creat some misunderstanding and ca...
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Suggestion: To
...ing and cause people to stop liking him.To sum up, being a famous star is certainl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, well, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59411764706 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58842913713 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.355451742 43.030603864 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.2 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171141610648 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106281346233 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032507218604 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171141610648 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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