People are more concern about their healthy lifestyle as more junk and unhealthy food available in market. Some people think is is government responsibility to measure healthy lifestyle of people, while other said it should be managed by self. In my opinion government should standardize minimum level of healthy life and it is also person responsibility to aware about their own health.
Firstly, government should define healthy lifestyle as that help to find number of less nutrition people on society, and that help to take decision that make society better, moreover measurement regarding healthy lifestyle help to control over food companies from adding chemical and other ingredient. Take an example India has their own food safety standard fssai that find out more than 20 percent more chemical ingredient in some food companies last year.
On the other hand, many people believe that health should be managed by individual, and health is biggest wealth of person life, furthermore different people has their separate demand of nutrition, for an instance people who went gym required more protein compare to other people, also health parameter changes on age and gender respectively.
Finally, in my opinion, healthy lifestyle depend on individuals but there should be minimal criteria that government should define. Take for example people who more physical work required more protein nutrition, while people who have have more mental work required more healthy and fiber food, while there should be government should provide benefits that help mental and physical fitness to society like public gym,swimming,walking street,strict law for human resource of companies.
To sum up with there is equal responsibility of government and individual society person about their healthy life style.
- Some people think Governments should take measures regarding the healthy lifestyle of individuals. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion 56
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in 5 different age groups in the US from 1850 to 2000. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52877697842 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77513497915 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514388489209 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.30160954 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.777777778 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8888888889 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285004119317 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146227593801 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110170729805 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159855366742 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807716257711 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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