[Test 3- Cam 9] The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the variation in the percentage of the habitats living in Yemen and Italy according to age in 2002 and estimation for 2050
It is clear that Italy had the oldest age group in the year 2000, and that the same is predicted for the year 2050. Populations aged over 60 in both countries are estimated upward trends over the fifty-year period.
In the year 2000, just over half of the population in Yemen was aged 14 or under, while the majority of Italians fell into the 15-59 age group, with 61.6 %, followed by the youngest group, taking up merely 14.3%. Furthermore, people aged 60 and over accounted for almost a quarter of the Italian population, but only 3.6% of the inhabitants of Yemen.
By 2050, the proportion of children aged under 15 in both countries is predicted to drop, most noticeably in Yemen where the figure is estimated to decrease by 13.1%. On the other hand, elderly people is projected to increase, by 2.1% in Yemen and a massive 18.2% in Italy. Finally, it is anticipated that the 15-59 age group will rise by around 10% in Yemen, but shrink by around 15% in Italy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63316582915 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50549396327 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562814070352 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3834221954 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205919494865 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957561548497 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537826684016 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136299387056 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273932786968 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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