The bar chart below show what the business and engineering graduate of a particular university were doing six month after graduating. the figure cover two year period.
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided column graphs denotes the comparison between two groups of graduate students; business and engineering first half-year activities of two different year in a specific university. It can be observed from the graphs that, most students of both group doing job but unemployment rate is slightly high in engineering grade.
To begin, about 62% business graduate get into the job in first year as well as near about 73% engineering also employed. In upcoming year 1st one workforce gradually increased somewhere near 5%, on the other hand, 2nd one’s portion also rose; 2% but not like as first one. Furthermore, approximately 28% business certified start their higher study in contrast only 12% engineer enter into advance degree course. In addition to succeeding year rate is declined little; 3% but still two third greater than grade engineer;8%. Meanwhile, very few pass one’s of business (8%-9%) goes either job or study rather they take some time. However, in same case qualify engineer ratio is comparatively low 2% in consicutive years. Despite that, a small portion of business graduate was still jobless 2% but in equal case grade engineer ratio was much higher in identical time period.
- The instances of part time jobs have rapidly increased in recent times Some say that it provides students with valuable experience while others say that it derails the students from studies To what extent do you agree to this statement 87
- The bar chart below show what the business and engineering graduate of a particular university were doing six month after graduating the figure cover two year period summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compariso 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pass seems to be countable; consider using: 'few passes'.
Suggestion: few passes
...than grade engineer;8%. Meanwhile, very few pass one's of business 8%-9% goes eithe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, third, well, while, in addition, in contrast, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24102564103 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74784716402 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676923076923 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7676945012 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.555555556 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4444444444 5.23603664747 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153065789036 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620595982224 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411518912108 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1268390058 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116098805201 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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