Many parents think that it is good to teach their children about money.
Why do you think it is important to teach them the value of money?
What are the ways that can help children learn about it?
Most of the parents consider educating their young ones about the significance of money and how to use it wisely. In my opinion, the younger generation should be taught about this otherwise, they would never know the importance of hard efforts behind making money and would recklessly spend on owning the material wealth. Moreover, there are several ways to motivate them to learn about valuing the money, that will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
The main reason to teach the children to value money is that they would learn to save money and use it optimally. Admittedly, when they understand the hard work applied to make the money, they will think twice before spending on useless things. For example, if a teenager enjoying parties and gadgets is told about the labor his parents put to give him money to spend, he would stop wasting money.
Another reason to make children aware of monetary aspects is due to the fact that he can learn to appreciate the hard work. The adolescent would know the naked truth of the world where nothing comes without money. Gradually, this would make him focus on his studies and learn the skills to get a decent job in the future. Without qualms, this will help him to be independent and earn employment in the job market instead of asking for help from parents.
Furthermore, as every child should learn to give importance to money, there are ways to educate them. Undeniably, parents can set the best example for their young ones. If the parents would not hastily spend on useless things, the child would also see and reciprocate the behavior. Additionally, when the elders narrate the story or share their experience valuing the money, the youngsters would definitely learn it effectively.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that the younger generation has to be aware of the importance of money and this can be done by elders through stories or experiences shared with them. moreover, it is important for them because in this way they will learn how to spend wisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...tories or experiences shared with them. moreover, it is important for them because in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86994219653 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48086835775 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508670520231 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1654407809 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332759367955 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115186880173 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705240846449 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188951235992 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632983373781 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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