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The diagrams show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes.
The pictures show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes using a simple tools.
The first method is swing basket. The tools which needed are basket made of bamboo or leather and two ropes. The water resources from river beside the field with the dept approximately 1-2 metres. Next, the basket tied up with the two ropes as a handle for the basket. The process begins when two people throw the basket into the river and fill it with the full of water. Then, they pull it together with their power. At last, pour the water inside the basket into the irrigation channel.
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The tools which needed are basket
The tools which are needed are basket
Sentence: This method use different tools from the swing basket method, they are bucket, pulley, rolley.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to use and different
Sentence: First, the bucket throw into the wells automatically connected with pulley so that can help for up and down the bucket.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by an adverb, particle
Suggestion: Refer to for and up
Sentence: Second, the cow pull the basket out from the wells in the slope land by rope connected with rolley.
Description: The fragment cow pull the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace pull with verb, past tense
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 238 200
No. of Characters: 1089 1000
No. of Different Words: 103 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.928 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.576 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.021 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 27 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.43 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.378 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.55 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4