Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community instead of visiting people talking with our family we just watch television .To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Television has become more popular all around the world .With it people attain the different type information .Those information people get through the t.v .They give some time positive and negative impact on family life.
some persons are too much interested to watch the T.V.most of the time they watch it and forget their family responsibilities.due to create many problems in their family .Moreover,most of the women watch the different type serial and they always feel it is reality .those things happened in the serial such as positive or negative.they thinks it is also happened in their family and always try to apply same rules in their family and with it some negative problems create in their life.
on the other hand,people watch the t.v and learn some positive things.such as people attain different ideas like how to improve the relationship with others.when all family watch the t.v together then they always spend more time and discuss lots of things.with it everyone attach with each other.
overall.it's clear that television is dangerous if people most of the time watch the t.v and don't care about their family and also some negative things those watch in the serials and movies to apply on the real life then that all things destroy the family relationship.so as for as i concerned about t.v.if people are interested to watch the t.v then they always learn positive things.
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