Nowadays people have plethora of job options to choose, enables them to switch to preffered field when needed. While few people advocates that, one should peruse the same profession throughout the life, others disapproves this proposal and belives, it will be better to change job at least once in life. From my perspective, there is no compulsion in job, switching to interested fields will result in job satisfaction, hence I completely agree with second idea.
Firstly, people perusing different jobs because of circumstantial pressure rather than job satisfaction. When pushing these people to do the same for their life long will disrupt their human right to chose what he like. For example a man is working as a porter for temporary job or to satisfy current nesessity, won't be interested to continue the same; once he get settled he will quit the job. People often feel bored to continue in the same profession for the whole life.
On the otherhand, changing occupation will give new experience, that will help the person to explore new fields. Public prefer to do their interested jobs than they are forced to do the least enjoyable jobs for the life time. Most of them have passion in particular area, perusing this type of jobs will give job satisfaction and professional growth. For example a person interested in exploring science if occupied as a driver, it will spoil his life but if he quits the job and turn to his mainstream it will boost his ideas and succeed in life. Changing jobs will help some people to understand themselves and able to do their best suited jobs, in addition it will escalate their confidence level.
Overall, it is best idea to change profession if not interested; there should not be any kind of restriction in switching the profession. Perusing best adapted carrier will enhance productivity and satisfaction; moreover people set free from unnecessary stess and can can run his passion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...nterested to continue the same; once he get settled he will quit the job. People of...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... to do the least enjoyable jobs for the life time. Most of them have passion in particula...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...e their confidence level. Overall, it is best idea to change profession if not intere...
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Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: can
...ple set free from unnecessary stess and can can run his passion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, so, while, at least, for example, in addition, in particular, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97839506173 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74542718836 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7588234876 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29113365973 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114824244712 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698848935157 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178512728191 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072277349979 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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