It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early stage.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinctions.What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior of children?
Nowadays it is very necessary to have knowledge about what is right and wrong specially while kids are growing up,because that is the time they need it most.They don't have that much sense,how to dealt with wrong.Some people use to punish their children while telling them not to do wrong,
Having know-how about right and wrong is one of the important aspect of grooming our kids,they must know that by doing wrong you can never be in people's heart.People will always remember what you did to them or doing any false act.Wrong will always keep you distinguished compared to others that is suppose to be right in every aspect of life. Children need to know at early stages because they have to go long way in their life and on the basis of their right and wrong people will judge them .Moreover,different people have different understandings,some believe to make them understood by penalized them or by enforcing them what is wrong and right.I think for right no one can force you but to wrong parents likes to punish their children and keep them away from it.
Above all,punishment has its own pros and cons.Some take it seriously and save them for good but due to severe punishments,lots of children get worst and they don't have any positive affect on them,indeed they become fearless.Accordingly,every country has its norms in terms of child punishment.Parents should punish their child if they are not changing themselves but in certain limits so they do not feel any inferiority complex or whatever,Furthermore,By doing counselling is one of the progressive way to handle the children or make them to know about good and bad.Normally Parents or teachers try to treat them forcefully ,In other words they torched them which produces evil in the children.
Also to punish the students either it's from teacher or from parents,totally against the law.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-27 | Rohail Ali | 73 | view |
| 2019-03-27 | Rohail Ali | 73 | view |
| 2019-03-27 | Rohail Ali | 56 | view |
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. 61
- Do you think that modern technology, such as the internet and computers will ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information?Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience. 73
- The role of prisons should be to punish criminals who have committed serious crimes. Training courses and education offered to prisoners are a waste of taxpayer’s money. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Do you think that modern technology such as the internet and computers will ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience 77
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...rong specially while kids are growing up,because that is the time they need it most.They...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ause that is the time they need it most.They dont have that much sense,how to dealt ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...that is the time they need it most.They dont have that much sense,how to dealt with ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , how
...d it most.They dont have that much sense,how to dealt with wrong.Some people use to ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...that much sense,how to dealt with wrong.Some people use to punish their children whi...
^^^^
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...nse,how to dealt with wrong.Some people use to punish their children while telling ...
^^^
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...he important aspect of grooming our kids,they must know that by doing wrong you can n...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...wrong you can never be in peoples heart.People will always remember what you did to th...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Wrong
... you did to them or doing any false act.Wrong will always keep you distinguished comp...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...distinguished compared to others that is suppose to be right in every aspect of l...
^^
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...stinguished compared to others that is suppose to be right in every aspect of life. Ch...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...stinguished compared to others that is suppose to be right in every aspect of life. Ch...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Children need to know at early stages because they have to go long way in thei...
^^
Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r right and wrong people will judge them .Moreover,different people have different...
^^
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...right and wrong people will judge them .Moreover,different people have different underst...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , different
...d wrong people will judge them .Moreover,different people have different understandings,so...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...ent people have different understandings,some believe to make them understood by pena...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake them understood by penalized them or by enforcing them what is wrong and rig...
^^
Line 3, column 625, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stood by penalized them or by enforcing them what is wrong and right.I think for...
^^
Line 3, column 656, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...enforcing them what is wrong and right.I think for right no one can force you bu...
^
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , punishment
...and keep them away from it. Above all,punishment has its own pros and cons.Some take it ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...ll,punishment has its own pros and cons.Some take it seriously and save them for goo...
^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , lots
...m for good but due to severe punishments,lots of children get worst and they dont hav...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nts,lots of children get worst and they dont have any positive affect on them,indeed...
^^^^
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...t worst and they dont have any positive affect on them,indeed they become fearless.Accord...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , indeed
...ey dont have any positive affect on them,indeed they become fearless.Accordingly,every ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Accordingly
...ect on them,indeed they become fearless.Accordingly,every country has its norms in terms of...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , every
...,indeed they become fearless.Accordingly,every country has its norms in terms of child...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Parents
... its norms in terms of child punishment.Parents should punish their child if they are n...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Furthermore
...feel any inferiority complex or whatever,Furthermore,By doing counselling is one of the prog...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 569, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Normally
...or make them to know about good and bad.Normally Parents or teachers try to treat them f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 626, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or teachers try to treat them forcefully ,In other words they torched them which p...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...which produces evil in the children. Also to punish the students either its from ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , totally
... either its from teacher or from parents,totally against the law.
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cher or from parents,totally against the law.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, i think, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96474358974 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26564502953 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532051282051 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 20.2975951904 384% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 235.766171238 49.4020404114 477% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 387.25 106.682146367 363% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.0 20.7667163134 376% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.25 7.06120827912 301% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264697583969 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160517997067 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639652553416 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151732309557 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547866329462 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.9 13.0946893788 312% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.77 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 10.1190380762 328% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.