In today's generations, the longevity of a person has increased as compared to the past generations. The average life expectancy of individual has soar with more improvement in health, resulting to certain major problems to people and society. Although long lives of person have arisen serious problems, there are solutions to cope up with it.
One of the first problem of long lives is increase in the budget for old people and therefore this effects the economy of the country. For example, government are separating the funds for retirement and medical care of aged people thereby cutting the budget from improving the country or education for young people. There is no doubt that this effects the future of young generations. Another major problem is the growth in the density of populations. There is very high demand for housing by old people which cause increasing in the price of properties.
It is important that action is taken timely to combat these problems. Government should extend the stander retirement age, such as the average retirement age is 55 years that could be extend to age 65 or 70 years as people are still healthy and in prime conditions. Individuals also have a role to play. They need to appreciate the aged people talent by encouraging them to raise the awareness campaign to young children about healthy habits and disciplines in life. Community leader can also prioritize them in some appropriate careers. Nevertheless, many have years of experience which can be benefited to society.
In conclusion, longevity life is very blessing to people, adding to their healthy lifestyle and proper mental conditions, but have many negative impacts. However, with the right action by individual, government and community leader it can be benefited to people and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'soared'.
Suggestion: soared
...erage life expectancy of individual has soar with more improvement in health, result...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15017064846 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78863191986 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7253773042 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196026047788 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571268059162 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406164645568 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102370111887 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429059178607 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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