Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Anna, a resident of 'Galaxy Residency, Redmond', and also a huge admirer of your prominent newspaper. The purpose of my writing is to draw your attention towards a unique animal hospital "Mother Marry Hospital" in Redmond, that needs help to raise fundings.
The hospital is already famous for various philanthropical work for the betterment of the animals and society. It assists with treatment and medications to the animals on the street and pet ones free of cost to cure their illness. Currently, it is running on self-funding and by the unconditional devotion of people who help by volunteering. However, nowadays it is struggling, as the number of sick animals increases in the vicinity, they are lacking with medicines and basic facilities as well.
I request you to publish an article regarding the patronize done by the members of this hospital and also appeal to the readers to provide their financial aid with active involvements in the mission.
On the other hand, if the hospital will not able to continue this work then we can lose the hope of welfare for abandoned animals, also it might be a possibility that their disease could spread, which leads to a catastrophic situation and detrimental for our young generation who are vulnerable. Certainly, the consequences would not be good for society and animals as well.
Looking forward to your positive reply.
Your Faithfully,
Anna Mathew
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...est you to publish an article regarding the patronize done by the members of this hospital an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, regarding, so, then, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15546218487 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99064343704 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2855971683 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25947591032 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821368720436 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485225944652 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112880192403 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483969168849 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.