Nowadays, many societies are accepted that women have strong empower to proof herself in many fields such as doctor, engineer, bureaucrat, being a mother and many more. However, some people who are directly related to these societies they are completely declined this fact and cannot bestow them equality. Even, they always try to neglect them that is the cause of injustice behavior, bitterness and negativity. So, I completely agree with this statement.
At begin with, there are many reasons of women gender inequality. I put my views in to three segments. Firstly, education system in our past history show that majority of Asian people are lack of educated just because of they are married in very earlier age and distributed their responsibilities, mostly women take care of her home, children and family life that's why they have lack of confidence. In addition, society can play very significant role for women personality development especially in-laws, husband, parents social gathering etc. Unfortunately, our society is narrow minded they always try to demotivate gender system whereas, they are anybody. Physical and mental supports are goes down stress free life but just because of abusive state of mind always generate competition between two genders such as men and women. that is the cause of unhealthy society. For instances, Our religious bestow us in religious book women are the back bone of the house they have responsibility to protect their children, house, husband so give them respect treat her with love, joy and equality.
On the other hand, many people are changed their mindset over the past 50 years and accept her being a working women. who can take care her child, house. family system and job as well. They are independent, even they have ability to take her decision For example, according to John son website, they wrote many blogs which are direct related to women empower and describe about women role being a daughter, wife, mother, working lady very beautifully. So, it is irrefutable that women are most significant creature of God. Although, they have God gifted talent.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that we could not neglect that 70 percent women are drives these societies and they have wonderful role for environment development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
... Asian people are lack of educated just because of they are married in very earlier age and dis...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...e of her home, children and family life thats why they have lack of confidence. In ad...
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Line 3, column 833, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ween two genders such as men and women. that is the cause of unhealthy society. For ...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...50 years and accept her being a working women. who can take care her child, house. fa...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...s and accept her being a working women. who can take care her child, house. family ...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
...en. who can take care her child, house. family system and job as well. They are indepe...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n are most significant creature of God. Although, they have God gifted talent. I pu...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Although, they have God gifted talent. I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12266666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63965519634 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.761183966 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.105263158 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210092968524 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625957731423 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540775303672 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138234924066 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254814541609 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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