At the dawn of globalization, world has become narrow compare to the past years. As a result, it is easier to know about the incidents happening all around the world. Some critics believe that it is not necessary for people to know about the events which are irrelevant to their life. However, some may carry the opposite view. As per my perspective, the letter view sounds rational to me and I take the position on account for the following reason.
To begin with, as a part of global citizen, it is essential to keep self-updated for what is happening in the whole world. This will help people to broader their knowledge. Mainly, students get benefited in their education. For example, students need to have all types of knowledge in school which help them to score better in the examination. Also, students would be able to speak well in debate competition, if they give regular attention to the world's news.
Secondly, from political perspective, it is essential to be aware of what is happening in the other parts of the world. This action would help people to know about the rules, regulations, believes and traditions of the other countries. It will guide people to broaden their thinking and refutes the wrong conceptions from their mind. For example, women were forced to stay at home after she got married during the time of my ancestors. However, people have changed their mind set once they connected with the outer world through social media, and at New Era this action supports women to have all the freedom after the marriage.
Further point, at the time of technological development, it becomes easier to get connected with outer world through social media like, internet, television and radio. From the economical perspective, people do invest their money in share market and stock market. Thus, it would be necessary for them updated about the global economy and it could be not be possible without the social media. To add to this, many important episodes happened in the world influence everyone's life indirectly. Few years back in 2008, people of United states had to suffered from a great economic depression, but people of the other countries didn't realize the outcome of this disaster at that time. Eventually, the depression hit many countries and people residing in those countries had to face the same difficulties. If people have noticed this depression earlier then probably such tragedies would never happen.
To sum up, according to the aforementioned reason, I strongly believe that people should actively participate to know about global current issue. Despite the fact that people are busy with work and daily routines, it is still dynamically advisable that we spare some time to know what happens outside where we live, because it will facilitate to secure our future and help people to fortify their life ahead of time.
- TPO 31- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO 42- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- TPO 13 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO 40.Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 70
- TPO 12 - It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2396.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00208768267 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61602550055 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53235908142 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5689479846 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9583333333 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148461145652 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046571575611 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048609037866 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951239003954 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327859739323 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.