governments are the ones who decide where the public money should be invested to bring maximum profite to their countries.While some people think that the government should spend more money in support of athletes,others think that art is more worthy. I strongly believe that sports are more worthy for three compelling reasons.
firstly, sports catch bigger audience than arts, thus government can benefit more from the investment in sports. nowadays the number of people who enjoy sports such as football, baseball or basketball are much numerous that people who visite the art galeries. the variability of the kinds of sports and the availability of the events brings a lot of audience. people can watch the events from home or go to the stadiums to assist to the games. the government can benefit from the huge audience by putting commercial billboards in the entrance of the stadium or around the audience chairs. Moreover channels pay big amounts of money to be able to air the games. the government can benefit from these games and make more money that it was invested for the support.
Secondly, athletes need more money that artists. athletes in order to be ready for any sort of game or competition need to go through long periods of trainings and coaching. these trainings are usually expensive since sometimes coaches from abroad are needed. In addition all athletes need physical therapy before and after the games. this kind of therapy is very expansive since it includes a variety of activity such as massages, ice baths, relaxing training etc. the athletes can't afford the price of these therapies, hence support from the government is surly needed. Moreover a lot of athletes get injuries that sometime require expansive surgeries.
lastly, athletes are more famous than painters or other artists since they are more active. athletes have a very busy calendar, if they are not participating in games they are surly doing charity activities.As a result, they are always representing their countries. So they need to be supported the most to give a good image of their homeland. In the other hand artists don't usually like to be known or seen, they are more likely to have a mysterious side in their personalities. In addition some artists like to live freely to express out they feel and do what they like.
All things considered, both art and athletics should be supported from the government, nevertheless the athletes bring more profites to the government that artists, thus they need to be more supported.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in addition, kind of, sort of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04047619048 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68017306613 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3187170992 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2272727273 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215696033024 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064208207115 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651004478291 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139763872685 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511918858631 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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