Big city vs small town.
I grew up in a small town and moved to a big city, which is why I experienced the good and bad sides of both. I never thought that I would like living in a big city, but I was proved wrong. I can never get use to live in a small town again.
Firstly, as experienced person, I know the advantages and disadvantages of living in both sides. Big city and small town both have same problem like public transportation, but in separate ways. In a small town, you have to own a car to make sure comfortable living, as long as there is no public transportation you cannot get around without your own. Usually the big cities don’t have public transportation problems, however owning a car causes much problems in big cities. The big cities have heavy traffic and the parking is very expensive. Public transportation is not free, but it is cheaper than driving, considering the gas and insurance.
Secondly, living in a big city is more exciting than in a small one. In addition, finding a job is faster and salary is always higher. The amazing part of the big cities is the nightlife. By working all day most of the city’s residence gets tired and they usually chill out evening. There are many places where you can spend your time extremely good. For example, going to the dance clubs, karaoke, eating out at the restaurants, going to the different sport clubs, taking a walk in a quite and pleasant park or just watch TV at home. Internet is fast in big cities and it gives big opportunities. On the other hand, you will practically never face with lack of the supermarket’s problem. I remember that I had to drive other corner of the town to get to supermarket, when I used to live there. In addition, people who live in a small town have much chores to do than who live in big cities.
Thirdly, there is no nightlife in small towns, but the price for everything is cheaper than big cities. The best thing I like about small town is that the fruits are delicious and products are more natural. The view of small towns are always beautiful and the air is cleaner, however it is too boring to live. There is not much to do and no entertainment places, which means you cannot go out evenings and weekends. The worst thing about small town is that you cannot go out with your girlfriend to favorite restaurant. Small towns are quite and very comfortable to live, however it is not so exiting.
In the summary, Living in a small town is good and quite enough, however living is a big city is much more enjoyable and exiting. I thing I can never get to use to live in a small town again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in a big city, but I was proved wrong. I can never get use to live in a small to...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...but I was proved wrong. I can never get use to live in a small town again. Firstly...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...n problems, however owning a car causes much problems in big cities. The big cities ...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...n, people who live in a small town have much chores to do than who live in big citie...
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Line 3, column 879, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
... small town have much chores to do than who live in big cities. Thirdly, there is...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...y is much more enjoyable and exiting. I thing I can never get to use to live in a sma...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...and exiting. I thing I can never get to use to live in a small town again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43723849372 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64804720953 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443514644351 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8353966227 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7037037037 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25925925926 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428929629482 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139648648925 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106515384326 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287650374496 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215658233216 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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