Some experts believe that children should learn a foreign language in primary school rather than secondary school. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Children
children should learn mother tongue in prime sch...
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Suggestion: to mother
children should learn mother tongue in prime school . than secondary...
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Suggestion: .
...ould learn mother tongue in prime school . than secondary school but few public be...
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Suggestion: Than
...d learn mother tongue in prime school . than secondary school but few public believe...
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Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...d learn mother tongue in prime school . than secondary school but few public believe...
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Suggestion: The
...arn a foreign language in prime school. the before an opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 41.998997996 7% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 154.0 1615.20841683 10% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 29.0 315.596192385 9% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31034482759 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.32059578711 4.20363070211 55% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.15612821717 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 24.0 176.041082164 14% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.827586206897 0.561755894193 147% => OK
syllable_count: 43.2 506.74238477 9% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4902177445 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.3333333333 106.682146367 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.66666666667 20.7667163134 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43668145311 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255064217609 0.084324248473 302% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.205400347565 0.0667982634062 307% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.43668145311 0.151304729494 289% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.8 50.2224549098 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.04 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.72 8.58950901804 67% => OK
difficult_words: 3.0 78.4519038076 4% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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