The chart below show the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, devides into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below show the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, devides into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The exhibited bar chart compares three different types categories, namely local-fixed line, national and international-fixed line, mobiles in terms of the aggrigate amount of time the citizens in the uk spent on calling over the period of 7 years from 1995 to 2002. Units are measured in billions of minutes.

A first glance at the bar chart reveals that all types of telephone calls without local-fixed line have encountered an overall ceiling trend in consumption between 1995 to 2002. Besides, the highest figures on the shown chart are for local-fixed line, but the people living in the uk saw a considerable fluctuation throughout the period shown.

Getting back to the detail, although the growth tediously over the last two year, national and international fixed line's figure climeb steadily from nearly 40 billion to above 60 billion at the end of the examined period. The uk's residents witnessed a significant vacillation in terms of the amout of time using to call from under 1 billion to under 40 billion minutes between 1995 to 2002 and in which time, the used of mobile phones were about nightfold more than the original.

It is explicitly observed that local fixed line calls were the most predominant during the period shown between 1995 and 2002. There was a slight acceleration in the figure and reach a peak about 90 billion in 1999 before dropping abruptly to over 70 billion in the last year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ficant vacillation in terms of the amout of time using to call from under 1 billi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98319327731 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76125554156 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584033613445 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8965483533 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.25 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187039664222 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859271683959 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407974779545 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124151734784 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285682010305 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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