Most high-level jobs are done by men. Should governments encourage that a certain percentage of these jobs be reserved to women? What is your opinion?
The importance of government should encourage and reserve seats for women, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial.The subtantial influence of giving equal opportunity to women has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on both men and women over the years. It can be said that government should give equal chance to explore because now a days women are getting higher education in every field. This essay will elaborate why women should give preference equally and some people think opposite to reserve seats for women.
At the outset, there are many reasons why government bodies should emphasis on women employment, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that women are not only competing with men in every sphere but also providing themselves superior. For instance, world has seen many powerful and prominent leaders from Indira Gandhi, Clinton and many more. And all the mentioned leaders mentioned are true example that an educated women is capable of achieving heights.
On the other hand, some people think that men have leadership skills which enable them to lead companies greater than women. Most women don't interest about their jobs after they got married. For example, recent research which has conducted in the USA has shown that after getting married, they prefer looking after their homes rather than their jobs. But these people are unaware of the fact that nowadays most women have stop thinking of getting married. Thus, increasing the number of jobs for women is necessary, and the governments have to compile companies to hire more women.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the role of women at work places is prominent and although the government are reserving seats for women in some countries should not be overlooked.
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also, but, look, so, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1237458194 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47650224885 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0356739712 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268585555274 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102924231445 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638127257549 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161694460412 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377050306078 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.