The historical building in your place is in a bad condition. Write to the local government.
In the letter, you should:
• why the building important is
• what its present condition is
• what action must be taken.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my disappointment at the condition of an old historical building “Castle of Tipu Sultan” which is located in Lahore on the Canal Road.
It is 700 years old and bears a historic value since it is a representation of unity of Muslims of that time. It was a place where all Muslim were gathered to make preparation for war against the Hindus and later after victory, it was used as a place for celebration.
Its condition, now, is extremely pity since most of wall have hone week due to deep and long crack propagation, and paint on its walls has gone rough. Its halls, in addition, are covered with dust and pits of birds, especially pigeons who are settled inside of it.
In order to maintain it, some proactive measures are needed. Firstly, maintenance of weak walls, which includes crack filling, is required. All of the castle, secondly, needs paint; therefore, heavy duty paint is essential because most of its walls are exposed to sun radiations. Washing of fort and cleaning of the nests of birds, finally, ought to be done which will result in the removal of dust and smell from it.
I hope you will consider my application and take it to the next council meeting, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Salman Malik
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y pigeons who are settled inside of it. In order to maintain it, some proactive ...
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Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...ch includes crack filling, is required. All of the castle, secondly, needs paint; therefor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77631578947 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69845934294 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2511186218 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143351001633 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443320312041 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247675221476 0.0603063233224 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660094577598 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239705217421 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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