You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter;
- thank your friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Hi John,
I hope you and your family are doing well! I’ve arrived safely in Accra. Thank you for giving me the best holiday ever at your place in Lagos. It was so wonderful to spend time with all of you last week.
In all the excitement I had, I realized I left my wallet at your house. I am fairly confident that, it’s on the table in the guest room. I forgot to put it back in my bag while packing as my taxi ride came earlier than expected. It is a black Gucci wallet.
Depending on your convenience, could you please pass it Kofi who is in Lagos this weekend this week before he returns to Accra on Tuesday. If not I’d be grateful if you could send it through express courier services. I would, of course, cover all the cost. Please let me know which one works best for you.
I’m sorry for the inconvenience I’ve caused you. My regards to your family.
Best wishes,
Emmanuel
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- You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter;- thank your friend for the holiday- explain that you left your wallet in their house- give 56
- You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter;- thank your friend for the holiday- explain that you left your wallet in their house- give 73
- Some people prefer online classes while some others think it is better to be in a traditional classroom Disscuss both sides and give your opinion 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... regards to your family. Best wishes, Emmanuel
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44970414201 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32652006953 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0920356946 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.7142857143 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0714285714 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357853687949 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111595085795 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091436455544 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219604237577 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900453143165 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.64 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.