In my perspective, the majority of relationships maintain in their best scenarios based on the reliability which individuals have. In other words, telling the truth and staying frank in relationships urge them and cause to remain for a long time. On the contrary, the failure of almost all relationships is the outcome of untruthfulness- avoiding saying the truth all the time. To put in briefly, I support my claim as following, having three reasons.
To begin with, it is religiously prohibited. I am a Muslim and Islam argues that people should always say the truth. Obviously, the directions of my religion abundantly influenced me a lot positive. Conversely, every time I did the opposite of what Islam said, I encountered to an unpleasant end. As in example, when I graduated from 12th class, I stopped studying, an action against what Islam ordered us. Consequently, I lost the majority of chances including my available job.
Secondly, not saying truth cause stress and sadness. Individuals who are dishonest in their relationships might be abnormal all the time. What I mean is, they might get stress and go under pressure. Thus, it causes the sadness, it brings bankruptcy in relationships. Additionally, the disappointment of failure drives them crazy and prevent them going ahead.
For instance, a citizen of mine, who was sometimes not true with his father, got a neurological disease. He attempted to hide his bad actions from his father, meanwhile, he was ashamed when he was alone. Indeed, he was doing the action, then he was thinking that he is deceiving his father. Lastly, a tremendous anxiety caused a problematic problem in his head.
Thirdly, not saying the truth might cause people to lose their credit, as well as, relationship. In my viewpoint, when somebody become aware of someone’s dishonesty, neither they will trust them nor they may continue the relationship. briefly I point to the well-known story of the dishonest shepherd, who finally became a meal of the wolf. But saying the truth all the time could build the relationships much stronger and protect it from a bad end.
To summarize, due to reasons I have mentioned, I would rather to tell the truth all the time in my all relationship than to hide some truth in them. Overall, I think it might end up a relationship after unveiling the facts if people avoid to say the truth. In contrast, it might develop the relationship if people stay true in their relationships all the time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'remaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: remaining
...nk in relationships urge them and cause to remain for a long time. On the contrary, the f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of chances including my available job. Secondly, not saying truth cause stress ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...used a problematic problem in his head. Thirdly, not saying the truth might caus...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Briefly
...nor they may continue the relationship. briefly I point to the well-known story of the ...
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Line 10, column 234, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid saying'.
Suggestion: avoid saying
...hip after unveiling the facts if people avoid to say the truth. In contrast, it might develo...
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Line 10, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue in their relationships all the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, consequently, conversely, finally, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for instance, i mean, i think, in brief, in contrast, as well as, in my view, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99759036145 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04501858637 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0878409185 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.7692307692 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9615384615 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 5.45110844103 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.85842293907 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119806288254 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344313691334 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326142139819 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654170001081 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377193922791 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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