As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? (RE-WRITE)
According to Richard G. Lyons from University of Massachusetts at Lowell, the reason why American workers could lead other occidental workers in gigantic hours spent at work is because work brings these workers satisfaction. Not surprisingly, job satisfaction which equates with individual enjoyment boosts workers’ productivity. But, what are the major contributing factors in the success of job satisfaction? Could they bring out a realistic description of workers? Without further ado, let's delve into this issue.
Result publishes from the approximately ages of 21 to 70, adult people will ...
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Sentence: Result publishes from the approximately ages of 21 to 70, adult people will spend their lives working.
Description: The fragment the approximately ages is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace approximately with adjective
Sentence: Frankly, I deliberate job satisfaction might be revealed.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to I and deliberate
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