many government thinks that economic progress i their mot imoprtant goal. some people,however thinks that other type of progress are equally important for a country.
This is 21st century the development of all the infrastructure in nook and corner of the country is essential for the country.
Government thinks the development of economy sector is the major part for the development of country however in my opinion i think overall development of all other sector in the country is the progress of the nation.
Development of science and technologies has brought world in a new era. Transportation,health,education, business and foreign aid projects are also the important sector for the development of nation. Government should focus on the development of these all sector, when these sector are developed the country economic sector automatically developed. Transportation connects the various places by which goods and services can be brought in less amount of money, development of education will increase the literacy rate of country and health is important factor for all the people living.
Economy development is the growth of economy of country. When country becomes rich people becomes lazy, why because country gives them facilities. Country may face problems in trade activities without factories and other productions of goods and services and it affects on country economy indirectly. Therefore for the development of economy other sector should also developed with it.For example development of factories, industries and production of goods and services will also help to increase the economy of country.
In conclusion,It can be said that with the development of transportation,health,education,business the economy sector will developed or else country will fail. Hence,it is clear that with overall development country can developed or else country will face various o difficulties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun government seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many governments'.
Suggestion: Many governments
...country is essential for the country. Many government thinks the development of economy secto...
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Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...opment of country however in my opinion i think overall development of all the se...
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Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , health
...ought world in a new era. Transportation,health,education, business and foreign aid pro...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sector' or 'these sectors'?
Suggestion: this sector; these sectors
...he development of these all sector when these sector are developed the country economic sect...
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Line 6, column 302, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... affects on country economy indirectly. Therefore for the development of economy other se...
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Line 6, column 368, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'develop'
Suggestion: develop
...ent of economy other sector should also developed with it. In conclusion,It can be sai...
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Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , It
...also developed with it. In conclusion,It can be said that with the development o...
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Line 8, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , health
...t with the development of transportation,health,education,business the economy sector w...
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Line 8, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , business
...pment of transportation,health,education,business the economy sector will developed or el...
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Line 8, column 124, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'develop'
Suggestion: develop
...cation,business the economy sector will developed or else country will fail. Hence,it is ...
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Line 8, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...veloped or else country will fail. Hence,it is clear that with overall development ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60655737705 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.05111289914 2.80592935109 144% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467213114754 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9619884655 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103171520628 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461580522691 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574890158027 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790021957429 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073798859771 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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