Some people say that children should be disciplined in their early age, and punishment should be used. To some extent do you agree? What kind of punishment can be used by teachers and parents?
The good human being is the state-of-the-art values and lessons given to a child at a very tender age. these values are inculcated by teachers and parents. some experts believe that these values can be given to the children by punishment while others disapprove this act. I completely agree with the fact that punishment can be a viable solution to make children aware of the good and bad, but it should not be a physical one. The following essay will explain the aforementioned situation with a reasoned conclusion.
The most crucial point to consider is that punishment could act as a learning method that would help a child to grow. For instance, if a child is behaving in an inappropriate way with someone or not respecting elders then parents could punish the child either by taking away his favorite toy or by not giving tv remote. Beating the child is not the solution as it would definitely impact on child’s brain. So, punishing the child is fruitful but not physically.
Another point which is convincing to me is that punishing children would help them evolve as a better person which could a boon to society. According to the statistics in Japan, there was a tremendous growth in the plantation of trees, in recent years and the reason behind this was punishment. Whenever a child does some unacceptable act, there is a punishment that was given by the teachers to the school students, which was planting a tree. In this way, they are making them realize how vital it is to behave decently. Thus, the punishment should not be a harsh one but a psychological or practical one.
To sum up, in my opinion giving punishment to children is essential to make them grow as a good person and educate them the basic values. but we must make sure that it should not be of physical nature but mental or on real-life based applications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71826625387 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78577564875 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523219814241 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7725236959 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274191033488 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886778057468 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886355351432 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163137173984 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894213676626 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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