It is often observed that some auspicious occasions like marriage are more expensive and extravagant. The basic driving forces for this case are many from the casual needs of arrangements to the hypocrisy in society. A marriage is a pure union of two souls, that should not be diminished under the monetary values, hence I believe it is a negative progression.
To commence with, from antiquity the splendorous weddings are made to mark a perpetual impact on others, in addition, it also depicts the status of families in society. Moreover, the new trends following like destination weddings like completing the ceremony in a separate place, which demands a high amount. In a recent piece of article from prominent "The Times", mentioned that around sixty percent of expenses are done from brides side in India is done under the pressure of grooms family. Certainly, the Orthodox tradition of dowry system makes impossible to bear the expenses of a simple ritual.
To emphasize my view, forced monetary demand on the wedding from the groom's side is a social stigma, and it never provides the surety of a successful after marriage life. Nevertheless, the money spent for a short term, just one day pleasure and celebration which is not worthy, this amount could be spent for the future purpose to add on the assets for new couple convenience. According to an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", which ascertained that around seventy percent of loans from banks are given for the fulfillment of the wedding ceremony. Consequently, the condition leads to stress and anxiety among the parents, that ultimately could end as any detrimental health situation.
To conclude, the expense done just for the one-day celebration of a wedding is insane, it is not an investment and certainly an unwittingly decision. The adverse effects of this absurd practice can lead to the loss of money as well as personal relaxation.Just to make one day special, people ignore the future negative aspects and impacts of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('unwittingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decision') instead of another adjective.
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Suggestion: Just
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94427866972 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582582582583 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.2626661117 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.230769231 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0925353248032 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323504784789 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339909731501 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597450842401 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257104364629 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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