Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
In today world, many people believe that allowing capital group to find highest profit is the best way to bring development and good life to society. For instance, they believe that growing of business means increasing of job positions, or intensive competition between enterprises usually generates innovations. Even though I accept this point to an extent, I still disagree with the idea letting business maximize profit without any regulation because of two reasons.
For the first reason, even though it is obvious that business lead to some benefit for society, it also has potential to produc...
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if we let business dominate everything.
Description: The fragment business dominate everything is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace dominate with verb, past tense
is extreme view.
is an extreme view.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 350 350
No. of Characters: 1785 1500
No. of Different Words: 217 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.325 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.1 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.511 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.927 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.295 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.505 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5