provided bar graph illustrates information on folks who ate five portion of fruit and vegetables per day consume in the report say that United kingdom used over the eight year.
Firstly, look at the bar graph in children in 2007 touched the highest point roughly one quarter than after 2006-2007 men performance is same consume the vegetables food around 28% after that women is hit the vertex in 2006 nearly third portion of circle cover in diet food. Secondly, whole nuclear family performance in amid 2001-2003 same level of eating fresh fruit. Thirdly, dramatically upsurge fresh vegetables food in among 2004-2006. Then after mildly change in last 2 year I. Kid, men and women. Last but not least, United kingdom more diet or fresh food eating in women then after inter-mediate level is men and in this era, more children spent on restaurant fast food eat and less importance given on vegetable food.
To conclusions, to begin year children, men and women five fruit is moderate different then last year 2008 tediously near and contract and more forward to deit side.
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- Writing task 1 ielts liz 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Provided
provided bar graph illustrates information on fo...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'vegetables'' or 'vegetable's'?
Suggestion: vegetables'; vegetable's
...007 men performance is same consume the vegetables food around 28% after that women is hit...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'vegetables'' or 'vegetable's'?
Suggestion: vegetables'; vegetable's
...it. Thirdly, dramatically upsurge fresh vegetables food in among 2004-2006. Then after mil...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... women five fruit is moderate different then last year 2008 tediously near and contr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96132596685 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47167032131 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624309392265 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.6440155888 43.030603864 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146333717214 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064207547154 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781874494395 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132369776162 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886648060147 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.