Nowadays, people are now frequently becoming sick as they are leading a very stressful life. This essay will discuss the main reasons for stress-related illness including work-life imbalance and unhealthy competition between peers at workplaces. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including work-life balancing and ignoring vicious competition in the workplace.
People are now working long hours in offices which are harmful to their family lives as they are spending less time with family members. Which in turn affecting their relationship and raising stress. Also, competition in the workplaces is now more vicious which is increasing mental pressure to the workforce. People are forced to embrace this unhealthy condition because they are unable to change the culture of the workplace. For example, sometime in offices, top management may push people to work long hours, and in other cases, people put themselves in competition to work long hours relative to their peers to climb the corporate ladder or to gain the trust of top management. All of these extra stress leads people to have both mental and physical sufferings.
Maintaining a proper work-life balance and ignoring unnecessary competition are both critical in mitigating stress-related illnesses. People should realize that maintaining work-life balance and overlooking vicious competition to climb up in the corporate ladder might provide them mental peace and physical well being which was not possible beforehand. For example, when people are leaving their work in time and spend the rest of their day with family or friends, they will surely feel stress-free. Also, by doing so, they are leaving behind the unethical satisfaction requirement of their company top management which is also helpful for their mental and physical health. Therefore, to be free from stress-related illnesses, one must keep work-life balanced and live far away from vile competition.
Modern times are very stressful times indeed. This essay discussed how stress is developing among people by disrupting the balance between personal life and office life and also by participating in unnecessary competition at the workplace. This essay also suggested that having work-life balance and leading a competition-free work life is very crucial to lead a stress-free life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54038997214 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91941407848 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506963788301 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7366233986 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102195745369 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439219650175 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283725043972 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788941977436 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365175942748 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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