Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A significant number of people argue tertiary education to be an ideal path for a promising career, while others insist to join the workforce right after school. In my opinion, tertiary education is a pre-requisite for a successful career.
On the one hand, there are some advantages of joining the work force after high school such as, individuals become independent at a very young age and experience practical aspects of life. This is because when youngsters enter the job market soon, it becomes a source of a steady income for them at an early age. It enables them to pay for their own expenses such as food, healthcare and other utilities and. Since, they are responsible for managing their own expenses, they become more independent than their peers.
On the other hand, we are living in a competitive world where employees are selected not only on the basis of their experience but also educational qualifications. Undoubtedly, individuals who possess tertiary education would have more chances to get selected and eventually secure a successful career. In addition, tertiary education is very important in certain professions such as, medical and teaching. It is impossible to secure a career path as a doctor after school, as a formal tertiary education is necessary to become a part of the health industry. Similarly, a doctorate degree is a pre-requisite for becoming a university professor.
To recapitulate, there are various reasons for people to support joining the workforce sooner or later. However, in my point of view, I believe higher education is necessary to secure a promising career in order to stand out from others in the job market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, while, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12454212454 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98257135083 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567765567766 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1653558462 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178704632527 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627131327498 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489430268148 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116732146405 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384189030311 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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