Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Rona Lyn Olivar, a regular customer of your Cozy Place Restaurant, writing to complain about the sickening meals and desserts we were served last Sunday. I am hoping that you would maintain your food standard and probe into the event that ruined our evening.
I, along with my husband and children, went to your restaurant at around 7:00 o'clock on 27th July to celebrate my husband's promotion in office. It was supposed to be a happy and memorable night because we were commemorating a special event as a family in one of our favorite restaurants. But we have had a frustrating experience.
We ordered lamb steak, spuds and toasted sandwiches as our main course, but the steak was salty, raw and hard. On top of that, our sandwiches were served cold! Though we complained about our food to the waitress, she did not mind us and instead told us to complain to the manager. The ice-cream that we ordered came without any marshmallow and strawberry on top, despite their mention in the menu. This was utterly annoying.
I demand a full refund that I paid for the meal and your steps towards making your staff behavior more professional and cordial. Otherwise, consider me as a lost customer.
I look forward to your immediate response regarding this.
Yours faithfully,
B K
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o the event that ruined our evening. I, along with my husband and children, we...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... went to your restaurant at around 7:00 oclock on 27th July to celebrate my husbands p...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, regarding, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 5.60731707317 696% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82300884956 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69276781621 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676991150442 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.7994979356 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8461538462 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124573254599 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381709769612 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394056880497 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638370225733 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501436406008 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.