You are organizing a seminar in your company. Write a letter to a colleague in another department to give a presentation in the seminar. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Tell about the seminar
Say why you want your friend to give the seminar
Tell about the arrangements made for the seminar
Dear Anil
I am writing to request you to give a talk on Data Analytics. You must have heard that I am organizing a conference in our company on the topic of Data Management and data monetization. I will be inviting prominent speakers from the industry for this seminar and request you to represent us in the seminar.
I have had the privilege of working with you on numerous projects on Data Collection and storage. I know, for sure, that you are the right person to give a presentation on this topic at the seminar. I still remember the project where you designed a system that can store data collected from different sensors. You could perhaps talk about the applications of this system at the seminar.
I have taken care of all the arrangements for the seminar. The seminar is planned for next Monday at 9.00 AM. I have booked the board room, which is quite spacious and well ventilated. It also has a computer and projector.
Let me know your decision. I certainly hope that you would be able to do a presentation at the seminar.
Sincerely,
Mark Hanes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rojects on Data Collection and storage. I know, for sure, that you are the right ...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sentation on this topic at the seminar. I still remember the project where you de...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66842105263 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74836138539 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6512404245 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3571428571 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220349705869 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731029238338 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545056490297 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13560148367 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523880493961 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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