Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to give my opinion on your decision of sponsoring either a local children’s sports team for a couple of years or to pay for open-air concerts twice. I would like to acknowledge both of your ideas and support your view of sponsoring a local children sports team.
There are many advantages linked to your company in supporting the kids for their sports. Firstly, the brand that your company holds can reach to every family if you can sponsor them. Also, this commendable help of yours would definitely catch the media attention and can give rise to your sales. Nevertheless, inviting famous artists for a concert would also be great as it would attract a lot of youth population and will be a hit promotional event.
I feel it would be beneficial for the area as well as your corporate in giving the funds to the local kids. Spending your finances in the form of sports kits like T-Shirts and caps with your brand is a great idea. Also, it would be great if you can bare their travel and food expenses as most of the students come from a middle-class background.
Thank you for the consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Venkata Saikiran.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74879227053 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6734929781 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599033816425 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5499143664 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281297056877 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113912249295 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900197476641 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189354984112 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102221254222 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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