Some psychologists say that doing absolutely nothing for a period of time each day is the key to decreasing stress in everyday life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In these days, there is a considerably development in many countries. this is a trend that is having effects on family sizes. Although often debated, it is felt as countries develop, the number of members of family decrease are the base precursors to this advantage. In this essay, a look at these causes and their affects will be made.
Firstly, the greatest causes of small family size are that people’">people’s outlook increase and they modernize. A lot of people say that when family size is large, cost of living is more than smaller family. Most people think about their future career and they believe that magnitude of family may make some problems for them. Such as looking after children, their medical education costs and others
The major effects of this are entirely positive. In some countries the number of people are very high, for example Chine, India. that is why, a rate of poverty is higher than other countries and this case may effect on state economy negatively. However, if the number of population are smaller, government can provide the population easily with work places, high wage and other important things. Therefore, people’">people’s prosperity becomes very good and this factor effects on people’">people’s life style positively.
Following this look at the causes and effects of a decrease of family sizes, I think that this factor is beneficial for people. Thus, as a result of a development of
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('considerably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('development') instead of another adjective.
In these days, there is a considerably development in many countries. this is a trend that...
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...iderably development in many countries. this is a trend that is having effects on fa...
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...re very high, for example Chine, India. that is why, a rate of poverty is higher tha...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
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... than other countries and this case may effect on state economy negatively. However, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23628691983 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.91871603272 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6614609336 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0440612231297 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176385221055 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239114299163 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.03132617188 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121297994735 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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