Many people are choosing to find information online rather than in books .Is this development positive or negative?
There is a heightened trend of seeking information over the internet and not physical books. In my opinion, it is a progressive way of consuming what one wants. This essay will discuss the reasons of the same.
Very Firstly, as smartphones have penetrated in ever nook and corner, it has led to ease of access to any kind of subject. Be it in the form of elementary school curriculum or advanced learning methodology.This is a true fact that physical presence is not required, as going to a library and searching for relevant content in a book is a time-consuming task. This in return saves a lot of time and open doors to vast information. For example, After the launch of amazon kindle the e-book, according to a survey by British library ,there was 28% increase in leaderships among the adolescents.
Secondly, internet has given us the mammoth variety in simplest of the ways. Everyone has the option of choosing what is the most viable options available. This has led to personalized technological innovations. For instance, if a mathematics student wants to learn about geometry, videos with visual images can teach better as compared to written examples on theory. We have seen an increasing trend of Wikipedia ruling the charts in providing free information on vast topics, having links to greater insightful videos and relevant facts.
To end, fetching information over the networks gives vast options and ease out physical boundaries and helps in enhancing learning in new ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04838709677 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96891412685 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633064516129 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8764749795 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3076923077 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0867027918071 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300044219973 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022518480252 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495743349987 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00992020934482 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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