Thanks to the evolution of the internet, nowadays, people are likely to purchase things online more than venture into brick and mortar stores. It is undeniable that online buying has been becoming a burgeoning innovation. From my perspective, this tendency brings out both pros and cons.
When it comes to the popularity of networked purchasing, conspicuously, a significant contribution in easier purchasing for the consumer is made. First, it is a quicker and cheaper way to shop since people can buy products at home without having to go to stores or shopping malls. Particularly, Amazon and eBay are two popular online designed platform which provides a huge number of diversified goods, in order to help the customer have a closer approach to visit and uncomplicated acquire. As a result, consumers can both save time and the costs of traveling. Second, online shopping allows persons to have a wide range of choices as well make a comparison of different brands or products. For example, Van and Converse shoes could be variously measured by the prices and the size, while it hardly evaluates at physical stores.
In comparison with the online shopping merits, it could be negatively performed in several ways. One evident drawback is that the buyers cannot obtain the sensitive handheld experience. In particular, a girl cannot try wearing a dress to see if it fits her body. Furthermore, shopping on the internet not able to meet the qualification that buyers in desire of owning also the maintenance commitment of producers. For instance, some attractively counterfeit item images usually utilize to draw customer’s attention with entrapping consumer’s purpose. Henceforth, people should raise awareness to avoid mistaken failures.
To conclude, online shopping creates essential equivalently opportunities for consumers in the selection of goods. However, the defensive border should be enabled to confront with the cybercrimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'platform' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'platforms'.
Suggestion: platforms
...nd eBay are two popular online designed platform which provides a huge number of diversi...
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Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...dly evaluates at physical stores. In comparison with the online shopping merits, it cou...
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Line 8, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...abled to confront with the cybercrimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 965.302439024 172% => OK
No of words: 304.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45394736842 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10296943609 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 106.607317073 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664473684211 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 283.868780488 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8891602122 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5294117647 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195523339872 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564702718418 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683023759341 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116490009867 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196043778933 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 40.7170731707 248% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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