Dear Mahfuz,
Thank you for your letter. It is always great to hear from an old friend. In your letter, you asked me about a professional course that you can take now to excel in your career. I'm recommending you take a course on project management, to be precise, "Project Management Professional Exam Prep" course offered by Mindmapper. It's a 5-day long course, and it runs on the weekends only. The training center is just nearby to Gulshan - 2.
As you are a civil engineer by profession, and you have 5-years of experience as construction manager for the Ena group, I think it will be very much helpful for you to take this course. In this course, you'll learn about the best practice for managing the project constraints and maintain a striking balance to deliver any project, mega or small, within the budget, time and resources. It will also help you to achieve soft skills in management and leadership. Above all, this course will help you to land in a new job with the highest pay possible in the field of construction project management.
Let me explain how this course helped me. I was working as an IT Project Manager of a small IT firm. I took this course and learned about the methodology of project management which helped me in managing different projects efficiently. Also, it helped me land in my new job as Project Manager at Apogee IT services ltd., a multinational IT service provider company.
I hope you will take this course to excel in your career.
With love,
Abed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ourse helped me. I was working as an IT Project Manager of a small IT firm. I took this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77186311787 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75584517375 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558935361217 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5082777544 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4375 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3125 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359122874044 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126370391845 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125662882045 0.0603063233224 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27205693157 0.12726935374 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118389423318 0.0580467560999 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.