People want to explore new things in life, they like to take risk and wants to do something different from others. Some individuals think that majority of humans are responsible for their own life when they are doing dangerous activities such as scuba diving and bungee jump while others opine that rescue workers are duty bound to save the life of these individuals. I agree with this statement because every individuals get more freedom to choose any field. I will discuss some reasons in the subsequent paragraph.
There are manifold causes which attract human beings to take participation in extreme sports. To begin with, with the help of media, individuals try to earn recoginition and fame by doing these activities. Even they know the consequences of such sports but try to get more public attention to become more famous.
Moreover, individuals feel a sense of more satisfaction when they come face to face with fears like bungee jumping, rock climbing and so on. In addition, going through a dangerous experiences gives them courage to handle the obstacle in their daily life. Furthermore, human beings select these sports activities as a profession to make their world record as well as to stay more healthy and fit.
On the other hand, rescue workers provide their services when the society unable to do anything. For instance, in northern Thailand , the rescue team workers and other international specialist finally found football players and coach which were caught inside the cave by rising flood water. Secondly, rescue workers are more experienced and they know better the danger places and also provide some beneficial information to individuals which is related to the safety and security of players.
To sum up, it is safe to practice any sport with proper planning and training, no matter how dangerous it is because risk is present in each and every sport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hing. For instance, in northern Thailand , the rescue team workers and other inter...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tter how dangerous it is because risk is present in each and every sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08038585209 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61893298758 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607717041801 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4330734534 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330263836221 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966487535096 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895594867553 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16080599002 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095377515679 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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