Since more and more people get to know the importance of how to become a good parent, the answer may vary because many of us are puzzled about it. As far as my concern, love, pattience and friendly to their children contibute to the key to be a good parent. I am a father who was a kid of my parents, I will address my views as follows.
To begin with, the love is the most important quality of being a good parent. All of the children need love. Although I was not the hero of this story , my mohther and I put pity on my firend when were in the middle school. The feeling then came to my mind whenever recalled this memory. Once this friend of mine was very easygoing, we had lots of good time when were playing together. One day I found something wrong on him so I asked why. Tears in his face, he said his parents were about to divorce and his grandma would adopt him. I felt so lost that I spent more time with him. But my effort didn't work. Later I invited him to have dinner in my home. During the supper time , he seemed to be still lost. I whispered to my mother with my friend's trouble. We alll felt so sorry about his parents' divorce. From that time, I kenw the improtance of the love from parents, it is irreplacable.
In addition, the patience from parents is also essetian to their chilren. Once I was annoyed by my son. He always asked some wired questions. There were some of the questions I could google it as where did the moon come from, while there were also some question that may worry Einstein like why the elephant could not fly.Once I found I was funny , while after a time I felt so boring and lost my temper. After reading some books about rasising children, I realizde it is the nature of children of being curious. Thing about myself my childhood were full of questions, too. May be it is becasue of my bad memory, or the expense of being an adult which lose lots of nature of human being.
Finally, the friendliness is another necessary quality of being a good parent. Once my parents were so strict on me that I would not want to make any risk. Thus I lost some of the working oppurtunities. When I was young , I was forced to listen to them without any objection. I was a tough time for me. I felt I was living in a box nearly isolated to the world outside. I tried to talk with them but they were affected by Chinese Tradition so much that they didn't listen to any words of mine. Thus I believe being good friend with the chilren is another significant quality.
In all, it is a good phenomenon that more people focusing on the way of being good parents, I belive the love, patince and friendship with the children would be the essential qualities of being a good parent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, still, then, thus, while, as for, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 15.1003584229 252% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25775193798 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31939261459 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490310077519 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4559009024 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5757575758 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.85842293907 389% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126562944257 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356824855513 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507130500639 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926854290774 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311662115861 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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