Write a letter to your college’s administration department complaining about the college facility.
In your letter include:
• what the problem is
• how this problem has affected you
• what the college should do to fix this problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am second year student studying Civil Engineering and I am writing to complain about the poor computer facility in our college campus.
Let me explain the situation in detail. I am regular user of computer facilities in our campus for surfing and studying purpose. Until quite recently, I was pleased with this facility which helped me a lot in my previous assignments. However, since past few weeks most of the computers in the laboratory are not working properly and are always on maintenance mode. It is quite annoying and frustrating that I am unable to complete my current assignment due to unavailability of these machines. Thus I left far behind my schedule of completing all the assignments.
I would like to request you to allocate skilled technician and required budget to repair these computers. In addition, try to update all computers with latest Operating Systems and few licensed software’s.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rakesh Soni
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ue to unavailability of these machines. Thus I left far behind my schedule of comple...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpleting all the assignments. I would like to request you to allocate skilled ...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...n addition, try to update all computers with latest Operating Systems and few licensed soft...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, second, so, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18787878788 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00575511644 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70303030303 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4372792571 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8181818182 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.080657487975 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270238617008 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336252759227 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480480775522 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376265354268 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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